2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education Pays Judging form this table,your degree is higher and you will get more income and your unemployment rate is lower. These dates suggest that your income depends on your degree.But is it true that your degree can ensure have a good future?I don`t think so.On the one hand,your ability of work is important and it will make your employee admire you.On the other hand,your opportunity will make you get a good job. In concludsion,the degree is factor alone to your future and you should improve your ability and try to seek more opportunitys.