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字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
The money for real need Money is indispensable for our lives, such as for food, clothes, books and any others. I think We should use the money for real need of our lives, which keep us healthy, improvement and development, not for the extravagant things. As students, we don't have so much money, which make us possible to realize to use it appropriate. Some of us pursue the stars and fashion. They may use the whole money per month their parents gave them to pay for a ticket or a high-end coat. And then they borrow money from other students one by one or ask their parents to give them more. This is not good. Actually, we also would be live without the ticket or the high-end coat. I think we should save money, which is not mean we won't buy the things we want. Of couse, we need to buy the quality things which fit for students. During the college years, we have enough part time to read books. So we can spend a little money for buying some useful books which can improve us. And we had better to get part or the money to keep us for food. Money is a good thing to keep us alive. We need save money for the real things we need which which can improve, maintain and develop us.
