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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第33篇:学校是否应该让学生评估老师

发布时间:2013-08-14 17:00浏览次数:1428
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. 

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

学校是否应该让学生评估老师。不同的人持有不同的观点。

字数要求:300字以内。

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作者在句法层面做的很棒;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。

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With the advance of college education in China, quite a few students flood into the university, and the issue whether the schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers have long captured our attention. Quite a few people, especially the students, claim that the teachers should be evalued by them. Personally, I am in favor of the view for the following reasons. First and foremost, the evaluation from students could encourage the teacher to make some arrangement during teaching, which is helpful to the studies of students. For instance, although one teacher who have made so much achievement in math, the pupils who attend his class have difficulties in understanding the way he taught. And a poor score may be give by the students which will remind the teacher to alter his way to teach. I concede that my view might not be completely sensible in all cases.

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