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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；采用了一些简单的从句。
Nowadays many people are crazed about certificate examination. why this phenomenon was so heated? or what the problem reflected under this crazy? There is no doubt that everyone want to have more certificates in their hand ."the more certificate,the more work chance"some people said.They regard the numbers of certificate as the chip when employing.Due to the employment pressure,lots of graduates have to do an examination to obtain kinds of the certificate. But the others have the different opinion with the former.They enjoy the participatory processes and didn't care about the quantity.As one as their concerned,certificate represents the affirmation of their ability and hard work. In my opinion ,I give the preference in the latter.In this full of competition society ,we accumulate the knowledge and meanwhile we should have own assertion instead of speak or behave as others do without views of their own.Don't regard the certificate just as the tool to find work,we should find the more positive side in it.
