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文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
In the past,all of us will know an honorable person "Lei Feng".From Lei Feng's story,it lets us know that we should do good things for other people,and we shouldn't except a reward. Some of the people think that one should be given a reward when they doing a good deed.Firstly,because they think that even the one doesn't want a reward,we should give him,that will encourage him to do more good things in the future.And the secondly,which is a way to show the society what we should do for the society and other people,then the world will become more peaceful than before.Thirdly,then person to person will be closer. But other people think that we shouldn't give reward to the one who does something good.They think that will give the public a bad example,that if we do something good,then we will get something back.This kind of thought is so negative to the public.And this thought will let the one who does good things for rewarding. In my opinion,it is not right to give a reward to the one who does good deed,because the thing we do is of our free will,and we should totally follow the example of Lei Feng.We do the good deed for nothing,just a good heart to other people.
