2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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As you can see,the degree higher the unemployment rate lower and the same time the payment more.from the unemployment rate average ,which from statistic.some college no degree and less degree are higher than the average level.the earning average level is higher than the degree that lower than associate degree. So ,in our college we should pay more attention in our major courses,which we can get more chance to get higher degree.then the high degree can bring good job and salary to our.