2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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As a young girl,I want to buy the beautiful things .And I think,you also want to buy it then the augly one .For this reason,some person sell their things with Excessive Packaging.Beacuse they tend to earn more with it .But we also waste our source on it .And the dose will become expensive after Excessive Packaging .Some poor people needs them to surivey. In my view,we should Package things simple and beautiful .If you do this well,you shop will be attractive either.And I will buy it too.So I suppose that You can sell it well in other ways to alter it .You also save you money . As a custmor,to save our sources,you should buy the Excessive Packaging few or do not buy them.