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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17431
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

There is no deny that computer is more and more important to human. It can help us find information in very short time, remain us of what I plan to do, finish some very complicated work. In one word, it makes our life easier and better. As a man, we always like to do some jobs which need use brain more than our body. This opinion is certainly right!That is because these jobs are more important to change and improve our world, and due to the computer can help us do these simple and waste-time job. That's why our world develop very quickly with help of computer! Somebody is afraid we will be ruled by computer one day, but that is just imagination! In fact, scientist has identified that is false based on the recent theory.

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