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Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No" As all we know,Chinese people are willing to say"yes'when we are asked for help,which is one of Chinese people traditional virtues.However,to say"yes"isn't only choice for us and sometimes we could say"no". There is a phenonmen that a part of people say"yes"when them should con fuse to do a favor.