内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From: hubin@163.com Date: Dec. 26th, 2008 To: KPOHsales@hobnail,tom Subject: To establish business relationships Dear Sir or Madam, I knew of the new product No. 5670 of your company in the exhibition held in New York from December 15 to 22.I am so interested that i hope you can send me its price list and instruction.Thanks for your cooperation,and we wish that we can establish good trade friendship. Yours sincerely, Hu Bin