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From:Wang Haiyang E-mail:wanghaiyang@hotmail.com To:Mr. Johnson E-mail:sales-department@hotmail.com Hello: I am Wang Haiyang.We have received 3000 pieces of products of your company on December 22.However,according to our signing of the No.35 order,the number of products should be 3500.That is to say that there are still 500 pieces of products that we haven't received.Please check your product list and we are looking forward to your early reply. yours sincerely, Wang Haiyang