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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17425
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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There is no denying that computer is more and more essential to human. It can help us find information, remind us of what I plan to do, finish very complicated work. In one word, it makes our life easier and better. Somebody is afraid we will be ruled by computer one day, but that is just imagination! In fact, computer will never get creative thoughts based on the recent theory. no matter how difficult work they can finish, they just do it according to human designed program. In other words, human can never designed a computer which can create another more complicated computer to improve itself, because we are not God. Computer help us finish all kinds of physical work, and give me more time to do mental work. That's indeed bringing a great development to our world. So computer will make our future such a bright and most of the people agree that.

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