2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

从句使用很不错，再接再厉；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

With the development of Internet,Internet has became more and more important in people's life,we can use the Internet to do many things,such as studying,listening music,finding a certain place through the electronic maps,finding delicious food,paying various fees and we can make some friends online.Through the Internet we can see and touch each other,as long as we don't believe others easily I think it is wise to make friends online. We can make various friends online we need selective to make friends.If you have graduated from school,and you want to study continuely and there is nobody accompany you,you can make a friend online to study with you.If you are an old man and you are alone at home,you can make a friend online to chat with you.If you want to find someone to adore you,you also can make many friend online. In conclusion,as long as we don't believe others in the Internet making a friend online is a good way.