2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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The way to success There are so many ways to success.Fristly,you must ready sometings for success.For example,you have to made a gola before you want to success.,what is your long term goal or short term goal?You must think it out and write down on a paper.Secondly,you should have a paln for your goal.How many time you have for this paln?you can account how many work to do every day and then write down on your paper .I think it is very useful .Thirdly,you will follow the paln and finish the work everyday.so you know:where there is a will,there is a way.If you want to success,you must insist on your paln . It is simple and difficult to sucess.Sometimes when you ready ,but lucky does not come. You should have a good balance for this situation oweing to chance do not come to everybaby. Above all,we must have ready and chance to get success.Good lucky to everyone!