题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;采用了一些简单的从句;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多;请注意分段。
There is a saying"friend is the secrate to success."so friend plays an account role in our lifes. But what is the first step when you want to make friends with someone, I think is trust. The friends in need is the friends in deed, so keeping on mainting trust. Sometimes a simple sentences such as"I get your back"can show trust betweet two person,