题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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It is belived that "friend is the secrate to success."so friend plays an account role in our lifes. But what is the first step when you want to make friends with someone, I think is trust. The friends in need is the friends in deed, so keeping on mainting trust. Sometimes a simple sentences such as"I get your back"can show trust betweet two person,