题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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It is believed that friend is the secrete to success. so friend plays an account role in our lifes. But what is the first step when you want to make friends with someone, I think is trust. The friends in need is the friends in deed, so keeping on mainting trust. Sometimes a simple sentences such as"I get your back"can show trust betweet two person,