题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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It is believed that friend is the secrete to success. So friend plays an account role in our life. But what is the first step when you want to make friends with someone, I think is trust. The friends inneed is the friends indeed, so keeping on mainting trust. Sometimes a simple sentences such as"I get your back"can show trust betweet two person,