2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

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Dear Sir or Madam, Thank you for your letter dated 28 June.First of all,I would like to apologize sincerely for the unsatisfactory handling of your order. Unfortunately,all our deliveries have experienced delays in that a strike launched by truck drivers nevertheless,as this dispute has now been settled,I am pleased to be able to inform you that we will replace your two damaged desks immediately and deliver them in two days.Hopefully,you will receive them on July 4. We would like to offer you 10% discounts on those two desks for the inconvenience you experienced.The check will be mailed within three days. I would like to take advantage of this opportunity to assure that any future orders will be dealt with reliably and efficiently. Yours Sincerely