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2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:33浏览次数:1955
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题目 How to improve student's mental health
要求
1.学生心理健康的重要性
2.学校应该怎样做
3.学生自己应该怎样做
字数:150满分:100分
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文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;句法方面做的很棒,加强复杂句的使用;词汇表达用的较丰富,另外请检查文章的单词拼写。

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Nowadays,students health is being cared,especially their mantal health.As the society grew ,there are more and more accident caused by students' phsicalogicalthought.Therefore,it's essential to educated themselves well,not only for ownselves,but also for the society. After all,school is the leader,which is regarded as the holy palace.Thus,it's the best zoon to cultivate their noble mind.Encourage students to do what they are interestd in as possible,hold health lectures very often,or open up series of events are effective measures to keep healthy. Furthermore,students themselves should doing something,too.No matter what difficulties you are in,don't give up without being stugguled.to have a good mood at any time is the best way to keep you healthy.

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