2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；可适当增加学术词汇的使用量。

Nowadays,students health is being cared,especially their mental health.As the society grew ,there are more and more accident caused by students' psychological thought.Therefore,it's essential to educated themselves well,not only for ownselves,but also for the society. After all,school is the leader,which is regarded as the holy palace.Thus,it's the best zoom to cultivate their noble mind.Encourage students to do what they are interested in as possible,hold health lectures very often,or open up series of events are effective measures to keep healthy. Furthermore,students themselves should doing something,too.No matter what difficulties you are in,don't give up without being struggled.To have a good mood at any time is the best way to keep you healthy.