题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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It‘s not exaggerating to say that maintaining trust is the most important thing to us.This is due to the magic power that maintaing trust have.It can give us happiness and peace. Take this for example:when you don't have a defensive ,and try to trust some people,then you will fell more happy.Just because you don't need to doubt there are some people will treat you.Moreover, psychologists find that the more sincere you are ,you may get more sincere from others, that's why I just said we should matain trust ,we'll get more happiness. So anyway, we just do what I am, and mataining trust to others, the world may change by your trust.Do you believe it,just do it!