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作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
Delegates from nearly 200 countries have spent the past two weeks in Warsaw, Poland. More than 9,000 representatives gathered for a United Nations conference on climate change. Organizers called the meeting to work toward a treaty to fight rising temperatures on our planet. The treaty would be signed in 2015 and take effect after 2020.
鍙彲鑻辫 - 划词释义
