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全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；采用了一些简单的从句；文中词汇表达丰富度要加强，同时要注意单词拼写；请注意分段。
We often say"yes"when we are askde for a help.However,we will say"no" if the beg hurts our safety and wealth and so on.Becuase on one want to let himself step into trouble.Yet,someone don't say"no"when them shoule say"no". There are many negective effect on it.For one thing,something take a long time for you to sovle it,Altough you do that,you can do it perfectly.
