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I have a classmate.His name is John and he is my best friend in my class.This afternoon,We were playing football game.He was running.Suddenly,He stopped and said to us:"who can heip me?" One teammate said:"what was wrong with you?"He said:"I thought that my feet were hurted in a conflict and I could not walk now."Then we called our teacher .After he came ,he drave him to hospital.And I made a call to his father. This thing shows that the people need help each other when he or she meets someting difficult.You will feel happy when you give rose to others'.And if you do that ,it also makes you two have better friendship.
