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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇，但请认真检查词汇的拼写；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请注意分段。
We often say"yes"when we are asked for help.However,we will say "no" if the request hurts our safety and wealth and so on.Becuase on one want to let himself step into trouble. Yet,someone doesn't say "no" when they should say "no". There are many negative effects caused by that action.For one thing,something takes a long time for you to solve it,Altough you do that,you can't do it perfectly.Then,it would make you damagous and hurt your health.Xiao Ming is a case in point.Some of XiaoMing's friends perfect to smoke.One day,his friends loving to smoke gave him a cigi and asked him to smoke.He in order to not loose his face in front of his friends so he smoked it.From then on,XiaoMing accstomed with smoking.
