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We often say"yes"when we are asked for help.However,we will say "no" if the request hurts our safety and wealth and so on.Becuase on one want to let himself step into trouble. Yet,someone doesn't say "no" when they should say "no". There are many negative effects caused by that action.For one thing,something takes a long time for you to solve it,Altough you do that,you can't do it perfectly.Then,it would make you damacus and hurt your health.Xiao Ming is a case in point.Some of XiaoMing's pals perfect to smoke.One day,his friends loving to smoke gave him a cigarette and asked him to smoke.He in order not to lose his face in front of his friends so he smoked it.From then on,XiaoMing accustomed with smoking.
