Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Traffic pollution With the development of economy and science and technology,private cars are becoming more and more widespread in China.Cars make our life more convenient,at the same time,traffic is a big source of pollution in cities. Producing cars needs a lot of resources and makes environment`s pressure become bigger.As is know to all,our resources is reducing.Besides,cars use fossil fuel and discharge waste-gas.Fossil fuel often cause air pollution.Traffic jams speeding cars brings much dust and endanger city residents` breathe. Of course ,private cars` number is on the rise which is an important reason. Our environment needs everyone`s effort.Green travel priority.