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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9787
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分87.5分
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拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

Goods package was once deemed to be a mere container for the goods, but it is quite another story today. Nowadays packaging is seen as an important link in sales cycle, and packages are generally made of various materials such as wood and steel . Many of them are fancy, some even overshadow the goods they contain. This phenomenon is called ' excessive packaging'. This new trend is perfectly understandable. As the economic develops, the market is becoming increasingly competitive, which requires the sellers to pay attention to every detail in sales link in order to improve the competitiveness of their product. Consequently, the sellers begin to attach importance to packaging. On the one hand, it is believed that attractive packaging can help to sell product, which spur sellers to improve the quality of packages. On the other hand, many businesses lack competitive product, so the only hope for them to attract the buyers is packaging. All these factors make some goods excessively packaged. In general, although packaging is an important link in sales cycle, improving the quality of products is the fundamental way to capture market.

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