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How Should Parents Help Children To Be Independent? In recently,A lot of parents help their children to da everything.It including study,life,exercises and play with friends.Not only do the parents this in purpose is good, but it often due to the children don't doing everything. According to this problem,parents should help children to b independent.As an Chinese saying goes, failure is the mother of succeed. Thereforce,parents should do this one by one as follow.One,you can try to let children doing something by themselves. For example,you can give them some money,ask them doing something to eat.Second,you can give them more freetime to study by themselves.Leave them alone.But you can pay attention to them in slience. Parents should help children to be independent.Because every children should growing up in no long time. The children study to independent as like the birds.Each little bird in order to flying more higher and more longer.The mother of the little bird will push them fall down their home.