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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5525
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
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1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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词汇表达较灵活准确,学术词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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How Should Parents Help Children To Be Independent? In recently,A lot of parents help their children to da everything.It including study,life,exercises and play with friends.Not only do the parents this in purpose is good, but it often due to the children don't doing everything. According to this problem,parents should help children to b independent.As an Chinese saying goes, failure is the mother of succeed. Thereforce,parents should do this one by one as follow.One,you can try to let children doing something by themselves. For example,you can give them some money,ask them doing something to eat.Second,you can give them more freetime to study by themselves.Leave them alone.But you can pay attention to them in slience. Parents should help children to be independent.Because every children should growing up in no long time. The children study to independent as like the birds.Each little bird in order to flying more higher and more longer.The mother of the little bird will push them fall down their home.

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