Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Chopsticks Hello,boys and girls,my name is Xiao feng.I`m very happy to stand here and share something about chopsticks with you. Chopsticks is very common in our tableware,but chopsticks have a long history in China.Do you know chopsticks` history is more than 3000 years.In other world,it is can date back to 11C BC.Besides,there are many folk tales about chopsticks.For example,Da ji invented chopsticks in order to make king Zhou happy. Moreover,chopsticks has many implication.Sending chopsticks to an old means foever happy and felicity and longevity.About children.it means mature quickly and so on.Of course chopsticks have its own way to use. That`s all.Thank you for your listening.