Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Chopsticks Hello,boys and girls,my name is Xiao feng.I`m extremely happy to stand here sharing something about chopsticks with you. Chopsticks are very common in our tableware,which have a long history in China.Do you know chopsticks` history is more than 3000 years?In other world,it can be date back to 11C BC.Besides,there are many folk tales about chopsticks.For example,Da ji invented chopsticks in order to make king Zhou happy. Moreover,chopsticks have many implication.Sending chopsticks to an old means forever happy and felicity and longevity.As children,which means mature quickly and so on.Of course chopsticks have different ways to use.In short,different people have different ways.However,with the development of technology,throwaway chopsticks are more and more received among people.Unfortunately,it is less impressive to the environment. That`s all.Thank you for your listening.