2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

文中词汇使用较丰富，学术词汇使用要加强；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

With the development of society,a lot of couples only have one child so that more and moe parents do anything for kids. For example,the 12 age of child or even more old but can't wash clothes and dish.And,I saw the reported that a university student with his mother goes to school and live together,why? How a reason amazing that the university student can do nothing in daily life,he must need his mother.I can't envision that what would happen in his future.It's that result of spoil of child. In my opinion,the parents should teach their children do something by themselves that when they were young.Firstly,teach them to wash the clothes,do the dish, cooking,etc..Secondly,don't forget to educate about aspect of thought,it's also essential.Thirdly,it's important to not afraid that they would work hard.After all,the parents can't do everything for them all their life. In short,I hope that parents let go of children's hand,they can get more freedom time and independence.