文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文中较熟练地使用学术词汇,但词汇量仍需积累。
With the development of scientific technology and global economy, the Internet has spreaded all over the world, even if in countryside, almost every family has been equipped with a computer. What results it contributes to is that people nowadays prefer to use Internet on interpersonal communication. On one hand, people communicate in the Internet is really convenient if two sides can not talk face to face.It can save Precious time ,increase daily efficiency and creat immeasurable value. At the same time, people could send amusing pictures accompany with the words to others. But on the other hand, using amusing Internet may result in decrease of availability and trust between people, because people can not sure what people's real mind across the screen and uncertain distance. As far as I am concerned, Internet has become an indispensable necessity, we can use it on interpersonal communication to keep touch whenever and wherever possible, but we also need face-to-face touch to increase mutual trust.
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