文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当。
With the development of scientific technology and global economy, the Internet has spread all over the world, even if in countryside, almost every family has been equipped with a computer. What results it contributes to is that people nowadays prefer to use Internet on interpersonal communication. On one hand, people communicate in the Internet is really convenient if two sides can not talk face to face.It can save Precious time ,increase daily efficiency and creat immeasurable value. At the same time, people could send amusing pictures accompany with the words to others. But on the other hand, using amusing Internet may result in decrease of availability and trust between people, because people can not sure what people's real mind across the screen and uncertain distance. As far as I am concerned, Internet has become an indispensable necessity, we can use it on interpersonal communication to keep touching whenever and wherever possible, but we also need face-to-face touch to increase mutual trust.
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