小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my good friend Dan, who like to play basketball, he spend 3 times every week. His skills so good that many girls like him. Dan is about 178cm tall, he also can speak English, he can communicate well with foreign friends. it makes him have a good seat to express his ability.