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the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1．According to the schedule，the touring will include…根据计划安排，旅行路线是…
2．Please be on time．请务必准时。
3．You call leave your baggage in the left．可将行李放在寄存处。
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Subject:Autumn outing Participants:The students of grade one Details:According to schedule,the touring will include following things.In the forenoon,we will visit botanic garden and attend the exhibition of Human And The Nature.In the afternoon,we will visit the Summer Palace. Time and place of assembling:At 7 o'clock on December 27.At the gate of our school. Matter needing attention: 1.Please take food by yourself. 2.The participants should enter name at the students union before Thursday.
