托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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Nowadays ,with the development of science and technology ,the world has been changed a lot in recent days.to some extent ,the efficiency of working has greatly improved ,at the same time .people's pace of life has quickened ,therefore ,the decision is made as soon as possible as well ,therefore ,there is a wide dispute about whether snap judgment can never be trusted around us . as far as i am concerned ,i believe that snap judgments can never be trusted ,the reasons are as followings, for the first place,the snap judgments are not perfect ,as it comes to one‘s mind all of sudden ,it maybe exist some disadvantages. secondly ,before we make good judgments ,we should account for all kinds of aspects to avoid to make mistakes and alleviate the less loss.just as the old saying goes ,before you leap ,please think twice,this is the same meaning in our life.