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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10552
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨;请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性,但文中有较多拼写错误;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Are Dialects Just As Acceptable in Poblic Places? Recently, there are a lot of debates arround whether the dialects are acceptable in poblic places. In my opinion, dialects are not acceptable in poblic palces. First of all, poblic places are mixed with many kinds of people who speak different dialects. If everyone speaks his own dialect, then it's difficult to make himself understood and it's time-consuming, and it will arouse misunderstanding between each other. Sometimes it may cause a fight or even worse. secondly, dialect is a kind of representation for a cetain palce. Everyone is proud of their oen dialect. But if everyone speaks their dialect, then their won't be communications. From what have been said above, we can see that dialects are not acceptable in poblic places.

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