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Dear Tony, Thanks for your trust, in my opinion, it is right work in groups together, Team building is very important for us everyone. Despite someone did not follow up your idear, but I think you can try to know his though, and try to hlep him know that team building is important thing, it also can develop your coordinated and communicated skills. Above is my suggestion. Yours Mary
