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高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:02浏览次数:4372
要求:
假定由你负责接待一个外国旅游团。请你拟定一篇发言稿向游客介绍南京。要点如下:
1. 南京位于中国东南部,是江苏省省会,人口约500万。
2. 南京有2400多年历史,曾有10个朝代在此建都。
3. 南京很美,有许多名胜,如玄武湖、鸡鸣寺、石头城等,还有许多现代化的工厂和高大的楼房。
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用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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Dear Professor. I am indeed very sorry that I did not manage to complete the paper you assigned the last week. It must take a lot of trouble for you, here, I deeply sorry about it. Because of a sudden illness falling upon me a few days ago, I have to be hospitalized in hospital for a week. During the period of hospitalization, I got an inconvenient condition to finish the paper that you assigned. So I have to delay my paper submit. I hereby submit the doctor’s note. Please allow me to apologize to you here again. I am released from the hospital on Monday. I have confidence to finish my paper within a week and I will complete the paper as soon as possible. So if you give me time to complete the paper this week, I will be deeply grateful. I hope you could understand my situation and accept my apology.

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