拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Dear Professor. I am indeed very sorry that I did not manage to complete the paper you assigned the last week. It must take a lot of trouble for you, here, I deeply sorry about it. Because of a sudden illness falling upon me a few days ago, I have to be hospitalized in hospital for a week. During the period of hospitalization, I got an inconvenient condition to finish the paper that you assigned. So I have to delay my paper submit. I hereby submit the doctor’s note. Please allow me to apologize to you here again. I am released from the hospital on Monday. I have confidence to finish my paper within a week and I will complete the paper as soon as possible. So if you give me time to complete the paper this week, I will be deeply grateful. I hope you could understand my situation and accept my apology.