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2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:33浏览次数:2053
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题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?

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1.对这种做法有人表示支持
2.有人并不赞成
3.我认为…
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Children are the future of nation,the apple of their parents' eyes.The vast majority of parents count on children being successful in the future.Hence,a growing number of parents send their kids to art classes.The phenomenon is highly debatable,and ideas vary from person to person. Some would claim that it is beneficial for kids to attend art classes. Children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge,which may put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up. In addition,children can make more friends,improve the communication skill.While the idea it is harmful to kids attend art classes is still held by some others.They argue, this will get a definitely negative impact on kids,in these parents's eyes,should be given more flexible time to relax and do whatever they interested in.And kids also need freedom because unacceptable art classes will absolutely eliminate the nature of kids. Thus,sending kids to art classes will undoubtedly hurt them. Therefore,in my opinion, it's more advisable that don't send kids to art classes,childhood is the happiest time in man's life.In conclusion,parents should let kids do whatever they interested in.

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