文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend. My friend's name is ali. He is sixteen year old. . He is liking fruit,meal and vegetable. He is good, kind and helpful. He is my best friend in my school. He is my classmate. I and my friend go to the class together morning. Ali likes playing badminton, ping pong, games and other. He lives near my house. In the afternoon, we usually meet at my house. We sit in the garden and read the storybooks. He is very good at Mathematics and Science. So, whenever I find difficulties in my Mathematics and Science homework.