2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Nowdays,computers have already came in to human's life.We studying,relaxing,even shopping with it.But all things have two sides,what computer give us?Let's calculate. Talking about the advantages of the computer,there are so much to say.For instence,it act as a teacher to tell ue knowledge,it also show us the latest news.In a world,it can tell us whatever we want.But on the other hand,the disadvantage of it also very huge.I will show it through some examples,the most normal one is that with the convenience of the type software,we often pay less attention to our handwriting.Another problem is that with too much resource from the computer,maybe we would steadly forget to get knowledge from our own mind,some people may even copy from the computer.Of course,the large amount of different kind of games also affect us,expecially teenagers. In all,I want to say,computer is a splendid invention,but we should use it with much thought.