2006年12月英语六级作文真题:西方的节日

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Nowadays,more and more people are celebrating western festivals in China.This phenomenon is so wildly,most of the them are young people and kids,who prefer to celebrating western festivals. First,the reason why they like celebrating western festivals because they think which are more wonderful and interesting than our own festivals in China.And the western festivals are all fresh to them,then they will want to know the festivals,and to celebrate them like who celebrate them in the Europe.Second,the western festivals are very lively for them,and the people in nowadays' century,all of the young people like happy festivals,such as Halloween and Christmas Day.And the third,that we think our own festivals are so boring these years,then they want to change,to find some other counties' festivals to celebrate,which will make them feel happy. But as the phrase said"A coin has two sides",so this action will lead to a negative part.We will forget our own festivals,this is not so good,because our own festivals are part of our country's culture,we should remember them,not by forget them.Not only by remember them,but also we should teach them to our kids,to let them know our culture,too.