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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5916
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

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文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;请注意分段。

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Nowadays, more and more environmental problems such as toxic groundwater, depletion of natural resources and greenhouse effect are posing a threat to animals, plants, even human'd survive. Clearly, Only the governments on this planets joint effort can be addressed the environmental problems. Even though the amounts of pollutants like automobiles exhaust, carbon dioxide emitted among countries are significantly different, the impacts brought by pollutants doesn't limit a certain region. For example, developing countries produces more carbon dioxide than developed countries, based on this, can you conclude that people in developed countries will suffer little from the harm of the greenhouse effect? In fact, as an old saying goes, "people are created equal," all countries around the world has experienced the extreme weather and are threatened by the increasing temperature resulted by the greenhouse effect. For this, how can you assume that the environment problems can be solved by a single country? Also, although developed countries emit less carbon dioxide, the amounts of natural resources consumed by them excessively surpass the developing countries. They are big contributors to the depletion of fossil fuel. However, decreasing the usage of fuels may slow down their economic development and lessen down people' comfort and convenience ,so they lack the motivation to change. Thus, other countries and international organizations has the obligations to ensure these countries fulfill their duty. Therefore, the global impact of contamination and some countries's negative attitude to solve environment problems discussed above are compelling reasons to enhance the international cooperation to deal with environmental problems.

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