2006年12月英语六级作文真题:西方的节日

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Nowadays,more and more people are celebrating western festivals in China.This phenomenon is so wildly,most are young people and kids,who prefer celebrating western festivals to celebrating our own festivals. First,the reason why they like celebrating western festivals because they think which are more interesting than our own festivals in China.And western festivals are all fresh to them,then they will want to know the festivals,and to celebrate them like who celebrate them in the Europe.Second, western festivals are very lively to them.And in the 21st century,the young people are liking happy festivals,such as Halloween and Christmas Day.And the third,what we think our own festivals are so boring these years,then they want to change,to discovery some other counties' festivals to celebrate,which will make them feel happy. But as the phrase said"A coin has two sides",so this action will lead to a negative part.We will forget our own festivals,and this is not so good,because our own festivals are part of our country's culture,we should remember them,not by forgetting them.Not only by remembering them,but also we should teach them to our kids,to let them know our culture,too.