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字数：300 满分：100分
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Different people have different ideas,as a result, I'm favor of the action they take. As we all known,study is our first duty which we should spend so much time and energy on it ,that there is merely no possibility to have a part time job to earn money ,except for the holidays. What's the most important, the major of the students can not keep the balance between study and activity. Moreover, most of us have not finish our four year's courses which provide us aboundant skills to be qulified for the job. Above all, I stick to holding the oppion that it's a good idea for us to save money in our daily life .Maybe , one day we will have enough money we need.
