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Last sunday,in my cherche came a new teacher.She is a funny woman,her class very intrsting and attackt pround from the songba.I like her beacuse of she give me a feel of saftited.Yeah,it's mum feel. Now,Imeet she have a time and i don't learn more iformantion to her,I konw she come form the Beijing and a mother of a girl.