2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays According to the data,it can be seen that,as the students growing up,the unemploy rate are coming down,while the median weekly earnings are rising.What can we learn about this result? During the recent years,people are pay more and more attention to the enducations,it has been playing an important role in our day life.Students study harder and harder for a higher degree,in that case ,they can find a more enjoyable job,but in other espect,it also need more education pays and make money later,so what's the point of study so long? As far as i concerned,money is neccessury for us all,but the spirit is our true life,the knowledge we worked on can help us enjoy our life.